A Cat's Perspective of Life

Phoenix · 18-01-2010, 09:14 PM

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Originally Posted by dandysmom

LOL, don't encourage me!!

I can't write like that, my poems always end up rambling on randomly for about 500 verses

dandysmom · 18-01-2010, 09:25 PM

Don't change; you write lovely poems! If you want to practice condensing, try haiku: three lines, 5 syllables in first, 7 in second, 5 in last.

Long cold Winter months,
Cassie dreams of fat gold koi;
Spring will come one day.

Phoenix · 18-01-2010, 09:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dandysmom

Don't change; you write lovely poems! If you want to practice condensing, try haiku: three lines, 5 syllables in first, 7 in second, 5 in last.

Long cold Winter months,
Cassie dreams of fat gold koi;
Spring will come one day.

try being the operative word

Leesy · 18-01-2010, 11:52 PM

Great poems RCR and DM, keep them coming

dandysmom · 19-01-2010, 05:16 PM

As I said earlier, don't encourage me!! I get these urges from time to time

HappyKatz · 19-01-2010, 05:41 PM

That is a very happy poem

Dylan sounds like one happy cat!
Life is so hard for a loved cat

Thank you for sharing another poem.

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