Catpages article - I've written one

dandysmom · 06-06-2006, 02:22 AM

Kazz, thats both well written and extremely informative! Bravo! However, in the General Care paragraph in the second line that "if but if" needs to be corrected. (Forgive me, bit I did proofreading for years at work).

dinahsmum · 06-06-2006, 07:40 AM

That's very good Kazz, made a little lump in my throat.
If you'd like to wait a couple of weeks, or are willing to amend it later, I could do you a draft para on introducing new kitten(s) to a pensioner household?

Kazz · 06-06-2006, 12:18 PM

Thank you very very much all and yes Dandysmum that is what I wanted those sort of mistakes I am bound to make. Thank you.

And DM of course I WILL amend it later if I ever get round to posting it.

dandysmom · 06-06-2006, 08:57 PM

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Originally Posted by dinahsmum

That's very good Kazz, made a little lump in my throat.
If you'd like to wait a couple of weeks, or are willing to amend it later, I could do you a draft para on introducing new kitten(s) to a pensioner household?

I wish you would; that would be very informative to those of us who've never done it!!

Donna · 07-06-2006, 08:19 AM

Excellent work Kazz.

Could we ask Kazz for a Advice section? And just have the articles on it - could he move your article to there?

We could have a thread like this as the article is amended etc, and then once you give the final approval could be moved to the Advice section??

Only a thought.....

dandysmom · 07-06-2006, 08:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Donna

Excellent work Kazz.

Could we ask Kazz for a Advice section? And just have the articles on it - could he move your article to there?

We could have a thread like this as the article is amended etc, and then once you give the final approval could be moved to the Advice section??

Only a thought.....

I like that idea very much, Donna!! Everyone...???

Hreow · 08-06-2006, 09:44 AM

It's a very good idea, but why not call it "Articles" so we don't discourage anyone who wants to write one but who doesn't know if it is "advice" as such?

LMC · 08-06-2006, 06:00 PM

Great article, full of "heart" and with obvious practical experience.

Not only do I proof-read, I have to write reports and frequent magazine articles for a living - would you mind if I revamped some of the grammar a bit to make bits of it a bit clearer?

Booktigger · 12-06-2006, 08:17 PM

I like that. I will get round to posting the article I wrote about mammary cancer one of these days - although there is a link to a scanned copy on here somewhere.

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