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28-05-2008, 05:01 PM   #1

My Poems


The poems I put here are not cat related, so that's why they are going here as supposed to on the cat forums.

The only ones I am going to post on here are the ones I am happy with.

The others I will be working on until I am happy with them then I'll be posting them.


The Misty Ocean is a wonderful sight
Blue, grey, green and white
‘I’m a sight for sore eyes’
The Misty Ocean sighs.

‘All the ships that sail on me
Should be aware that I am the sea
I can get really wild
Although I prefer to be mild’

The Misty Ocean is so good
It normally behaves like it should
Unless the wind makes it mad
Then it really will get bad!


At The Bottom of the Ocean

At the bottom of the ocean
A shipwreck lies
All brown and black
All rusted and worn, rotting away.

At the bottom of the ocean
The shipwreck lies, forgotten by people
Forgotten by everybody
Seaweed clinging to it.

At the bottom of the ocean
The shipwreck is rotting away
The sea lapping against it
Is making it rot away quickly.

At the bottom of the ocean
The sea eats away at the shipwreck
The shipwreck is in a poor state
All rusted, worn and torn.

At the bottom of the ocean
Lies a shipwreck
With a gash in it
From where it hit an iceberg.

It hit the iceberg and sank
It has been in the ocean ever since
Rotting away
With help from the sea.

At the bottom of the ocean
Lies the Titanic
She hit an iceberg then sank
She has been in the Ocean ever since.

The Golden Sunset

I sit here and look
At the Golden Sunset
Thinking about the beauty
of this day

I sit here and think
About the beauty of life
And the beauty of the
Golden Sunset

I sit here and look
At the sky and I ask myself
Where is the heart of the
Golden Sunset?

I sit here and think
About the meaning of life
And the beauty and heart of
The Golden Sunset



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28-05-2008, 05:09 PM   #2

Re: My Poems


Those are wonderful poems!! You are a creative thinker!
I love all of them so far - especially the golden sunset - it sounds so pretty!



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28-05-2008, 05:13 PM   #3

Re: My Poems


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Those are wonderful poems!! You are a creative thinker!
I love all of them so far - especially the golden sunset - it sounds so pretty!
I'm only creative when my brain wants me to be!



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28-05-2008, 05:15 PM   #4

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I'm only creative when my brain wants me to be!
Thats how I am with my art - have to be in a creative mood to do stuff like that



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28-05-2008, 05:21 PM   #5

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Thats how I am with my art - have to be in a creative mood to do stuff like that
I can't draw to save my life!

We've all got things we can and can't do.



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28-05-2008, 05:26 PM   #6

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I can't draw to save my life!

We've all got things we can and can't do.
Thats why your poems are so good! You can sure write beautifully



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30-05-2008, 02:56 PM   #7

Re: My Poems


This one isn't as good as the other poems, but it's just about OK I think.

The Ship

The ship is setting sail at last
I have been waiting for this day
So long, so long
Our ship is sailing off today

Our ship is sailing today
The wind is fanning the sail now
We are leaving the land behind
With all our other ships in tow.

We are sailing, sailing, sailing
Sailing away to new lands
Leaving the old behind
For the boat to get new hands



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02-06-2008, 02:37 PM   #8

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That poem was definitely more then ok! Its lovely Sailing away to new lands...love it!!



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02-06-2008, 07:59 PM   #9

Re: My Poems


This one I've got to improve a little bit. Look upon it as work in progress.

Dreams

Have you looked up
Into the clouds
And wondered what dreams
The night may bring?

The night may bring memories
Or it might bring bad dreams
It could also bring fantasies
Or it could bring none of these.

Have you ever wondered
What dreams could pop up unexpectedly
In the middle of the night
When you are asleep

When you dream
What do you see?
Do you see your memories?
Or do you see something else?



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02-06-2008, 08:04 PM   #10

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Fantastic Poem again!! I must say that is one of my favorites. I love poems about dreams



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